Tuesday 29 October 2013

5 sentence challenge

I think they are at the vet. I think they help the animals . they wait In the wanting room then they go for their check up. There is a dog. it looks black and fluffy.

By Ali



1 comment:

  1. Hello Ail, What super sentences you have written and well done for joining two short sentences to make a longer one using a connective 'then'.
    Well done for using adjectives (describing words) 'black and fluffy'. These help to create a picture in my mind.
    Keep up the great work.
    Mrs Duxbury (5sc team)

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