Wednesday 30 October 2013

The five sentence challenge


They are at the vet. There are lots of unwell animals.There is a vet man, and there are lots of medicine.One of the dogs has a broken leg.The dog looks mean,nasty and horrid.

By Zara

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  1. Miss Crampton 5SC Team31 October 2013 at 23:29

    Great sentences Zara. I like the way you have used 'and' to make one of your sentences longer. Keep up the good work!

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  2. Anonymous17 November 2013 at 13:22

    well done Zara I liked how used wow words in your story and capital letters,full stops, joining words to make sentences longer.By Samaya

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