At Garfield's market they had face painting.They painted my face like a skeleton.I saw people selling meat and fruit.There were heaps of people.I liked getting my face painted.
I really enjoyed your 5 Sentence Challenge Cooper you have used lots of details, such as the face painting. You have not only said you had your face painted but you told me what you had done, a skeleton! This makes your writing more interesting to read. You have also started each of your sentences with different words which again makes it more exciting to read. Thank you Cooper.
I really enjoyed your 5 Sentence Challenge Cooper you have used lots of details, such as the face painting. You have not only said you had your face painted but you told me what you had done, a skeleton! This makes your writing more interesting to read. You have also started each of your sentences with different words which again makes it more exciting to read. Thank you Cooper.
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