At guy fawke night they do fireworks and fireworks are very very exciting. They are very very colourful. They can explode. They can came in different shapes. Fireworks shoot up in the sky. They explode in the sky and come done.
Well done on your 5 sentence challenge Troy. You clearly know lots about fireworks because you know about Guy Fawkes. I like the way you have repeated the word 'very' to make your writing even more exciting to read. You have used full stops and capital letters correctly too which is great. Next time you could try and think of words other than 'They' to start your sentences. Well done Troy.
Well done on your 5 sentence challenge Troy. You clearly know lots about fireworks because you know about Guy Fawkes. I like the way you have repeated the word 'very' to make your writing even more exciting to read. You have used full stops and capital letters correctly too which is great. Next time you could try and think of words other than 'They' to start your sentences. Well done Troy.
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