Friday, 8 November 2013

Fireworks. By Ella

Fireworks can be any colour. I like the ones that collapse over each other. First they burst into the air then... BAM!!!! They make such a lot of noise when they burst into the sky. People celebrate it once a year. I was really amazed when I saw them.




2 comments:

  1. Super writing Ella! I really like the way you used BAM to describe the sound as well as writing about what you see. Well done.

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