Friday 8 November 2013

Fireworks by Amelia

Fireworks are flash lights they go up and they flash. I went up hill and you can see the pier. we had sparkles up the hill and flash ones at home.they look like lights and like big huge stars they light up your way.


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1 comment:

  1. What a wonderful 5 sentence challenge Amelia, I enjoyed so much I read over and over again. You have used so many describing words like, 'flash,' 'huge' and 'sparkles.' These words help me imagine what it is like to be watching the fireworks you are writing about. You have also used different words to start each sentence which makes it more interesting. Thank you Amelia.

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