I was excited because the other night I out with my Mum.We went out to watch the fireworks.Some fireworks are small, some are big and some are even tall. Fireworks are colourful, they are green, pink, orange, red and yellow. Fireworks make a loud sound like this boom bam.
Well done Evie! You have written some lovely sentences about fireworks. I like all the colours you use to describe how colourful they are. You have used 'Boom Bam' to help the reader understand the noise they make.
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