I like firework because they are colourful . The fireworks are big. The firework say boom!.The firework were invented by China. at the end the firework fall down on the ground.I like fireworks.
Well done on your 5 sentence challenge Jack, you clearly know lots about fireworks. I like all the different ways you describe fireworks using your senses, sound 'boom' and sight 'colourful.' Maybe next time you could think about smell, I think they smell smoky. You have also used full stops and capital letters correctly; I look forward to reading another from you soon.
Well done on your 5 sentence challenge Jack, you clearly know lots about fireworks. I like all the different ways you describe fireworks using your senses, sound 'boom' and sight 'colourful.' Maybe next time you could think about smell, I think they smell smoky. You have also used full stops and capital letters correctly; I look forward to reading another from you soon.
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