Fireworks can be all sorts of colours. I think fireworks are really really, amusing. They are only seen 3 times a year, these are the 3 times you see them, Guy Fawkes Chinese New Year and Diwali. China invented fireworks. Fireworks go BANG then explode then they glitter to the ground!
A really interesting 5 sentence challenge Joel, I like the way you have used facts to describe fireworks. I really like the image of the fireworks 'glittering to the ground' this is an excellent description of what a firework does. I also like the way you have written 'BANG' in capitals to create the affect of it being really loud. Next time you could try and use commas in lists, like where you list the times we see fireworks.
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