Friday 8 November 2013

Fireworks

In some fireworks on Guy Fawkes they change colour in the sky.One of the fireworks I saw was called Saturns missile and the sound it made was ear
splittingly loud.Other people that where watching had to cover their ears.Some of a firework landed on Rufus's head but it didn't hurt him. I like fireworks.

1 comment:


  1. This is a wonderful 5 sentence challenge Cooper; it is very descriptive I can imagine I am there. That is because of the way you have used your senses to help you like 'ear splittingly loud,' and telling us what you saw. You have used full stops and capital letters correctly so well done. Maybe next time you could write why you like fireworks so much. Also I am glad Rufus is OK.

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