Fireworks are beautiful things that the Chinese people invented. They have them at the Chinese new year and Diwali. They only have them 3 times a year.They only show at night. I like guy Fawkes night.
Thank you for your 5 sentence challenge Isabel, I enjoyed reading it. It looks like you have learnt lots from your lessons in school about fireworks because you know about Chinese New Year, Diwali and Bonfire Night. I really like the use of the word beautiful and you have used full stops and capital letters correctly. Next time you could write about why you like fireworks.
Thank you for your 5 sentence challenge Isabel, I enjoyed reading it. It looks like you have learnt lots from your lessons in school about fireworks because you know about Chinese New Year, Diwali and Bonfire Night. I really like the use of the word beautiful and you have used full stops and capital letters correctly. Next time you could write about why you like fireworks.
ReplyDeleteI love your story Isabel. Maybe you could not use 'they' to much then it would be better. By Samaya
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