Fireworks make a Ioud booming sound in the sky.They are made out of fire.Fireworks are big and round.Fireworks are different colours. They look like sparkling dust when they explode.
This is a wonderful 5 sentence challenge Holly. I really like the wow words you have used like 'booming' and 'sparkling.' With these words you paint an image in my mind of the fireworks that is very clear, so well done. My favourite sentence is the last one, what a wonderful image. Next time you could try and think of other words to start your sentences instead of 'they' or 'fireworks.'
This is a wonderful 5 sentence challenge Holly. I really like the wow words you have used like 'booming' and 'sparkling.' With these words you paint an image in my mind of the fireworks that is very clear, so well done. My favourite sentence is the last one, what a wonderful image. Next time you could try and think of other words to start your sentences instead of 'they' or 'fireworks.'
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