Friday 8 November 2013

Fireworks by Olivia

There are fireworks with all sorts of colour. Red yellow green and purple. First they are down on the ground then they go up and look beautful. Next they spread out. After that they sparkle back down.

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  1. Anonymous20 November 2013 at 01:25

    Lovely writing. I really like your use of the words sparkle and beautiful to describe the fireworks.
    From Broadway East Digital Leaders (Team 5SC)

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